jueves, 11 de septiembre de 2008

Alvarado Valverde Jesùs 408

In this blog I´m going to write my English work

6 comentarios:

Mtra. Marsella dijo...

OK Jesús, now the next step is that you choose what are you going to do from the 2 choices I gave you.

Mtra. Marsella dijo...

You haven´t done anything!

Karen dijo...

hello, I'm Karen **
I'm checking the mistakes about your blog, so here i leave you some advices:
first* you should re-read your writting, there are many misspelled words
second* you should do reading comprehensions
third* in the unit 2 you should put which salutations are formal or whichare used between friends so then.
fourth* at unit 3 you should finish it and put examples and activities
hope these advices help you* and so check the mistakes about my research work ;)

Anónimo dijo...

Hi
well, it's a little green....
however, i think you have a complete blog and the activities are very good, well, too many for my like

well, see you, good luck and keep doing a great job.

oustiesto dijo...

Hi jesus,I'm Magnolia:
Hey, take care with a lot of words which are misspelled, you have to correct some grammatical tenses.

Mtra. Marsella dijo...

Hi Jesus, you are doing a great job, however, you have to go back and check all the mistakes you have, here I have a list for you, so take note:
1. Don´t forget to write English or Spanish with capital letter.
2. Be careful with the spaces, for example in and, you wrote an d. And sometimes you joined 2 words by not writing the space.
3. There are some misspelled words or incorrect grammar, check this, It must be: it is important, meanwhile, expressions, what´s your name, good night, let´s start, it´s good to see you, address, all the animals, architect, your name, years, to think, this mental, it is known, language, these exercises, comprehend, expectations, start, all the things, I prefer these ones, possible, blocks, are you worried, I am a little worried, and what´s your problem, choose, we can arrive.
4. In some parts you don´t write the spaces like in "or find".
5. It is "greetings" not "greets".

OK, please read again and correct it. See you on Thursday.